Not so good...
Well, I think you put more effort into the preloader. I could barely tell what you were saying. And 2.8MB for this? Ugh... But honestly, you could have put more time into it.
Not so good...
Well, I think you put more effort into the preloader. I could barely tell what you were saying. And 2.8MB for this? Ugh... But honestly, you could have put more time into it.
I didn't do the preloader. And unfortunately, I didn't have that much time, so... =(
Good effort?
Well, not really. But it was a lame attempt. And for that, I laughed. Wetting ourselves? Please... That was not in the least scary. Maybe screamers are your thing, and maybe not Flashes. But either way, at least it was funny, and I shall favorite it.
What? You say it is a lame attempt and then you favorite it?!
Surprisingly, it's not spam!
Haha, that was kinda funny. I figured it'd be a screamer or something. Great job kind sir, great job.
Too short...
But for a first Flash it was really good. The animating was very smooth. You should have added some sound though. And it was too short. Well, off to a good start.
Well. Well. WELL
The joke was good. But the guy's expressions were kinda lame. It could have been better though. Poor execution you can say. Keep trying!
Needs serious work
Well... It was not really that good. The animating was ehh, mediocre to bad... The voice acting was god awful... Or at least Yako's was. She sounded like a robot! All the dramaticness was killed by the cheesy voice acting. Music would have been nice. Maybe if you started earlier, you could have had more time, and with that time, greatly improved on this. Well that's enough constructive criticism for me.
I'm kinda a noob to Flash. I'm not good at voice acting so you dont have to tell me. Yako's Voice was a robot yes, I used sitepal to have the voice made. you type in and then their computer says it. I dont know any girls that even would let me ask them to be a voice without them calling me four eyes and try to embarrass me for the next week. But if i did, I would ask them. I dont want to bother you with all my reasons and blames on other people but it seriously isnt my fault. I thought to myself that music could of ruined it. Maybe in the spots where it's still. But i think it might of made it very messy. I thought i should of started earlier too. But i was too stupid to realize it. I was going to make it longer but Halloween struck to damn early. :(
Well
The voice acting hasn't really improved... But this one is still pretty good. The great atmosphere's still there, that's also good. This one wasn't as great just because not much happened, but there is much more to come...!
A little too short...
The only problem with the series is that they're a little too short. But they're still good. I like the inter-activity, it's pretty unique and different. Voice acting still bad, but whatever. I just really love the atmosphere of this series...
Quite...sad.
But it was good. Animation was pretty good, and the music was really fitting. I liked the black and white, and simple style. Story was pretty cool, and sad. Also kinda depressing. All in all it was really good though!
I'm sorry, but...
...there is just no excuse for how bad this truly was. There was no point, just some text, and a bad picture. And some bad music. Improve the graphics, make a storyline, give us some animation, and make it in Flash please.
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